My struggle in writing 2

Aulia Rizki

54653/2010

Mid semester writing 2

My struggle in writing 2

            In the early morning before subuh, I finished my sahur and started to prepare go to campus. This is first day of “semester pendek” in my campus. The situation of this morning is so fresh, the dew cover of leaf and I heard “Tweet..Tweet” that’s twitter of little bird. Even though the temperature of outside is cold, I tried to take shower and ready to go to campus. I was felt my body still tried because of woke up did not on my schedule. I think study need struggle and sacrifice to make the best result and it is happen now. On campus, I met with my friend and she said:” keep spirit for this semester “ I response: “ yeah…of course.. You too”

            After finished my class in the morning, I back to my boarding house and sleep until 12.30 pm. After zuhur pray, I went to campus to take class of writing 2, the lecture of this class is miss Leni Marlina. Because of that my friend asked me:” are you sure we would pass this class?” I answer: of course, even though need more struggle”. She said:” yes, I hope”.  In the first meeting of writing 2, my lecture look likes full spirit, she’s face did not show someone fasting, her sounds is loudly and make the all of student focus on her lesson. I really shock on my first meeting because I got so may assignments, that makes me think to want resign of this class but that is too late.

            In the next day, I am so lazy to enter class of writing 2 because the assignments of writing 2 look likes a ghost for me, I know my weaknesses on English major is writing and I don’t like it. All of assignments are a big trouble for me, I don’t want to touch it but I must. Time to time I would try to make assignments well as I can. My friend also helps me to make it done but I was feeling the assignment never done. Besides the assignments, my lecture also used different method to teach us, she want make our essay became better, that is peer Review, the other big problem to me. For assignment I just need five days per week to make it done but peer review methods makes me never got holiday every week because Monday until Friday use to learn and make assignment writing 2, also Saturday and Sunday use to peer review my essay and my friend’s essay too. On week end my friend asked me: “did you free tonight? Let’s hang out together!” I answer: sorry bro. I did not, I have many assignments, his response: “oh poor you! Forget about your assignments, come join us” I react: “I am not just much assignments but I tried too and I need much sleep, go on without me” and my friend gone also leave me with my assignments.

             In the Friday afternoon after class of witting 2,  I destiny to go to my hometown because I free for 2 day. I was felt tired and bored. I came around 9 pm in home, suddenly my body became cold, my faces look likes pale and flat, my stomach got sick, and finally I got fever and maag. My mom asked me: “what happened with you, why you to be like this?” I just quiet while keeping my stomach. My mom is so panic and frustration, she’s suggesting me to go to the doctor but I could not move. Finally my mom gives me a medicine and it makes me sleep. I got sick for 2 days and my mom suggest me to take a rest.

            Before I back to the padang, my mom gives me some medicine, she did not want her child sick anymore. My mom told me: “keep your healthy, sleep well and do not push hard yourself, I answer: “ok mom..I would try”. Those are my personal experience as long as take writing 2 in semester pendek. I just think it is my way to be better rather than before and I should not regret about that. I hope my struggle give a good result in the finished of writing 2, I wish I will get “A” on the end.

The best friend is real?

AULIA RIZKI

54653/2010

NARATIVE ESSAY

The best friend is real?

            When a child grow up became teenager so many changes in them self, one of changes is interpretation about anything, they would selected to choose anything related them self. Friend is one of the chose, based on oxford dictionary friend is “person you know well and like also supporter” I am disagreed with this statement because friends usually hide them secret on you also make you became looser. My opinion is never best friend in the world, they are just someone wearing mask in front of you and look likes support everything you do, but truly the just a liar and want something by you.

            I had some experience about friend, I ever treason by my friend. Start when I got punishment in school and all of my friends to know about that. I would try to hide this moment to my mom because afraid to anger. I suggest my friend to never talk about that to my mom and he agrees with that. One day, my friend asks me to help him homework but I could not, he looks angry and disappoint, I ignore that. When I came home , my mom ask me about my punishment and I ask my mom who tell about that, unpredictable  is that him, my best friend.

            The other experience is my friend steals my money. I suggest everyone to never belief with your friend even though you closer each other if your still friend for a moment. When you meet with a new friend and he looks like so kind, do not make your belief him soon because sometime it just pretending to get your emphasize. Friend would change by money, so many histories tell about that, never friend based in money.

             Friend is coming when happy and disappears if you get troubled. You must avoid a friend like that because they are not the real friend for you. If you have a friend together in every time with you even though you got troubled that is best friend but it so hard to find someone like that. It is so lucky for everyone has friend like that.

            In Indonesian have proverb like this “one friend is enough if he always together with you but a thousand friend is trouble if came when they need you” I hope everyone can found them best friend and always keep your best friend. For everyone has not best friend should have filter to found a good friend because we do not know what aim of someone friendship with us.

What should I do to achieve score A in studying writing 2?

Aulia Rizki

54653/2010

What should I do to achieve score A in studying writing 2?

            Live is procedure, we need progress to get the all of what we want in the world. We need more struggle to get our purpose. Now, one of my purpose is to get the best score in writing 2, I recognize about my writing skill is still poor, so many problem to produce well written. I have a dream to get the best score “A” in this short semester. Even though that incredible, I wish my purpose to get “A” became truth. What should I do to get score “A” in writing 2? I will do some efforts to improve my writing skill.

            First, I have own my idea. Mostly some people do plagiarisms when they started write something, it is so hard to find a new idea when you start write and to solve your problem is plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the criminal activities in the world right now, because it is like a thief from someone even though just mind product. I  should find my own idea from the other sources such as reading a book, listening the news or browsing on internet. Right now, it is so easy to access many sources by everyone; every time and everywhere, from many sources we can get new inspiration to write essay. Then, the other inspiration also came by discussing and share with your friend.

            Second, I think management of time is important. We often ignore our assignment when it is done, this opinion is false because did not work in writing. When we finished make a new assignment we should peer review that to improve our assignments. Do not ever stop write even though you have much time. Beside that time management also important to know how long someone produce written. When you start write please check the time and when you end the write please check it too and make result how long you need the time.

Third, I think use my own style to writing. Everyone has a different style when they write something. We should focus with our style even though it less then our friend. Style of written is the key to make us comfortable when writing. Do not cheating your writing friend’s style because it will make your confuse and did not help you develop. So stay on your style.

The last is confident. Mostly students is not confident with them self, they usually reference or cheating them friend when make it assignments. I should be confident because I want to give the best on writing 2 to get score “A”. Beside that we are honest with our self. Please say “yes” when you can do something and please says “no” when you cannot do that.

Those are my efforts to improve my writing 2.I also keep my spirit to pass this semester. I believe the all of my efforts can help to learn writing 2 and to get the best score “A”. I wish my dream to get “A” on writing became truth.

Pro and Con : Game Online For Children

Aulia Rizki

54653/2010

discussion essay

Pro and Con : Game Online For Children

Today, game is not just play by you self. The developments of era makes people can play game together with their friends, it is called game online. This is a big phenomena right now, started in 2008 more that 298. 2 million video games were sold in the US. The development of game in the world is not just on adult level but also influence the children and teenager. The problem started when the content of game online mostly violence and influence the habit of player especially on children and teenager. This essay will discuss about pro and contrast game online for children and teenager.

The all of player’s game online have problem in physical activity, the sense of working when playing game online just hands and finger also coordinate with brain so the other sense is not work. So many players just sit on the chair and watch the screen. The big impact is new emotion sense produced by playing game online, in the fact so many cases cause by game online. In fact 2008, the game grand theft childhood reported that 60 % of middle school boys who played at least one mature-rated game hit or beat up of someone. It is indicate game online change the habit of childhood became violence. The next reasons why game online must control is expensive. Players need much money to buy console/ gadget and paying internet. So many parents tells about them children spend much money for buying and playing game online.

Besides that game online also have the positive impacts for player. This are game online improve coordination of player’s sense. When player playing game online there are watching and push the button together, it is make eye and hand co-ordination together and that is good for development of children. Game online also have faction as entertainment, the full schedule of children in school makes them got stress and game online is solution for it. The purpose of creator game online make it is for fun.

In conclusion, game online is not just have positive effects for children, but also negative effects, that why the parent must control of the content game online .the parent must accompany their child when playing game online to filter the negative content.  The parents also control the coast and time for playing game online because player often ignore the time and play until they are tired. So never leave your child play game online lonely.

SOURCES:

http://e63-area.heck.in/kelebihan-dan-kekurangan-bermain-game-bo.xhtml

http://www.teach-ict.com/gcse_new/entertainment/games/miniweb/pg8.html

My weakness and strengths in writing 2

 TUGAS WRITING 2

GENERAL ESSAY I

AULIA RIZKI

My weakness and strengths in writing 2

One of the difficult skills in english department of UNP is writing 2, this is a primary subject for all of students English department. Writing 2 is next level after writing 1, so if you are not passed of writing 1, you will not take writing 2 in next semester. Writing 2 is subject about writing ability that students learn about make sentence well. It is one of difficult skills, in fact so many students retake this subject for twice or more because did not passs it. One of many students retake this subject is me, this is for twice is I should to know about my weakness and strengths in this subject.

Some of my weaknesses in writing 2, first about use a grammar, this is the basic of my problem in writing and I think also happen with another students in English department UNP. The problem of grammar started by determines of a sentence is past, present or future, I always hard to produce a sentence with a good grammar. In fact grammar is important to produce of good written. The next weaknesses is less vocabulary, when produce the sentence we need to know about vocabulary because it is the based rule to make a good sentence. Sometime the vocabulary we used to produce sentence is ambiguity, so we need to know much about vocabulary and when we used well.

I also have some strength in writing 2. The first is focus on idea, the power of my idea is strong and the explanation of that is structural. So every main idea has sub-sub idea. The development of my sentence as structural; start from general to specific. The second of my strengths is argument or opinion. I love to give my argument or opinion on my essay. This is about giving our perception about hot topic we discuss.

In conclusion, the all of my weaknesses must solve quickly because it is a big problem to me to pass of this subject. Beside that also share and make group of study with my friend to improve and solve my weakness , the other ways I use to solve my weaknesses is read a lot of book, this help me to found my style on writing and have so many references. About my strengths need improve became perfect.